Writer is losing gusto

I found this book much slower than the previous two. I’m getting sick of the “made their way” phrase. The narrator is inconsistent with her accents and is mispronouncing words on occasion. Overall this series seems to be going downhill.

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main character has NO backbone

3rd book in and Eve still has no backbone! she does not stand up for herself or her position! it is so infuriating! couldn't finish another book listening to her whining!

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This ending never gets any easier to take in

This Narrator makes these wonderful books come to life in such an amazing way! Her voices for each character and the emotion behind it😍 Eve and Asher have a long road ahead of them💜

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Everyone deserves redemption

Would you try another book from Randi Cooley Wilson and/or Jorjeana Marie?

Well, I want to know how this story will finish, so, yes, I will listening the follows books of this series. After all, this book is a change to the currents books

How would you have changed the story to make it more enjoyable?

Based on what I listening unitl now, I think there wasn't necessary five books. On three books this story could be told.

You didn’t love this book... but did it have any redeeming qualities?

The fact I didn't love the book, don't mean I didn't like it.

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Superb, absolutely wonderful

This series is blowing my mind, I can’t get enough of it. The characters are wonderful, their strong yet vulnerable, passionate, loving, caring, all one could want in characters. The story line is excellent, I am completely addicted. Next I’m reading book 4 and greatly look forward to it.

Fantastic!

I just downloaded the 4th book! I can't stop listening to this series! These are great

It’s harder and harder to like Eve!

I would think that moving forward with this story/series that Eve would grow as a person, but she still seems to be the same or maybe worse.
She is always a damsel in distress and never able to fight back or even try with all this training she seems to be working on. Always acting on what she wants and thinks is right. And she doesn’t understand she can’t protect herself, so why the hell does she put herself in danger every time and having the needs to complain every time a babysitter is a pointed
I think I am going to fast forward the last two books just to get thru this story since I already invested this my much time into this story! Bummer! This would of been a perfect book if the writer would have wrote a less annoying/childish character.

Skip to chapter 8

That’s when something started to happen but then we went back to her feelings I didn’t even dawn on me that she doesn’t stop to consider what other people feel so can’t really give a review on this because I couldn’t make it past chapter 8 the reason I gave rated a 3 was because I really don’t like to give anything below a three as this story about all her feelings might appeal to someone else how she feels about what it’s doing to her of how people lied to her and how she put a knife through her boyfriends chest but it was how it made her feel
Oh well that’s why we have so many different kinds of writers as I said in the other reviews when I tried to listen to these books maybe it was for younger generation and it does include intimate moments

Audiobook Doesn’t Match E-book

The story itself is fine, it’s slower than the last one. Eve could grow a pair, for sure. It’s much like “New Moon” of the twilight saga. Hate to get through it, but necessary for the story/information.

But why is the audiobook different from the version on kindle unlimited? This threw me off. I like to read it myself when I can, and listen when I need to. The chapters were different. Example: audiobook chapter 7 is called forbidden fruit and talks about something entirely different than in the kindle version, where chapter 8 is forbidden fruit. Chapter 8 of the audiobook is called broken... and talks about things I haven’t read yet?! What??

I also noticed when trying to read along with the narrator that she either skips words, or entire sentences. I’m confused about the inconsistency and annoyed that I don’t know which is the correct version to read.

If she is mankind's salvation they may die

This one was worse than the last but I'm committed to finishing this series. So most of this book is repetitive, she keeps saying things like...."Asher looks at me and I gasp from the intensity. His kisses numb me and I lose all train of thought. Asher is so handsome he takes my breath away." That got annoying quick. then she described how good he looks only to end with I can't find words to describe him. She was so distraught over him leaving at the beginning that she didn't want to live.... but her best friend gave her life so she would fulfill her purpose and she barely mourned her. At most she got a mention. This girl has no depth. She found out some bad news and I was like this should get her moving to take action but all she cared about was having sex with Asher and being with him and needing him. I need liquor to finish this series because she is just the worst.