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    Description

    Earth, wind, water, fire, life, death, mind control... 

    What if you had one magical power and one power only: the ability to use all other forms of magic? 

    The catch is, you need to level each and every one of them up first. 

    What would you do?

    ©2020 Simon Archer (P)2021 Simon Archer

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    • Chaz R.
    • 03/04/2021

    Dude...I almost didn't make it

    Here's the thing, good story, great snu snu. Now I've listened to a number of Simon Archer books now and like them in general and as a whole. I got this book because of his good record with me, but. Dear sweet mother of god, sister Mary and Joseph! The freakin talkin and inner monolog WHILE IN COMBAT that went on kept cutting the flow of the story. Seriously, almost had to stop the book and leave it behind. Sort your story, when there's action, keep the action. When self reflecting and analyzing be somewhere doing something that doesn't leave the reader asking "did he stop time", or are they just waiting for him to finish like a anime transformation scene.

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    • Tempered_reaction
    • 03/04/2021

    Too much side track.

    The MC gets side tracked/ distracted way too easily. What was more infuriating was that the MC would go off on a tangent in the middle of a fight scene. Narrator could be quite a bit smoother in his performance. The story felt jerky with the awkward stops in the storyline.

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    • Anonymous User
    • 05/03/2021

    ya...

    narrator needs to stop putting emotions into his voice... he sucks at it... and tries to put it into places it dosen't need to be.

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    • christopher Baldinger
    • 17/04/2021

    harem killed the story.

    the rest of the book was fantastic from the narrator to the world building. it's just the harem is over bearing, unrealistic and very unwanted. it would of been twice a good without the harem.

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    • MadHun
    • 28/04/2021

    What a way to start a book

    Drier then the desert in the first four chapters. I just had to stop the title of the book was so promising and it failed expectations miserably.

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    • Kindle Customer
    • 16/04/2021

    inner monologue problems

    loved the concept and the over all plot. To bad the MC is a whiny bumbling inner monologuing douche canoe.,.. Seriously just shut the fuck up and grow a pair.

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    • jacob garrett
    • 15/04/2021

    not what i was expecting

    I was expecting a typical lit rpg action adventure. What I found was 50 shades of grey in an action adventure setting.

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    • Mark
    • 15/04/2021

    Way too much internal monologue

    Besides the love scenes every action is backed by twice as much internal monologue. If the mc did less talking to himself a lot of which is redundant the experience would be much better.

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    • Anonymous User
    • 08/04/2021

    took a while

    the book took until about halfway through for the mc ti start exploring. it also felt like there was a little to much dialogue in some places I got bored of it could have used a bit more action

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    • robert
    • 14/03/2021

    it's good.

    Like a concert decent story but the main character Is a little contradicted what more may is a self isolation next month is crying over people just met or simply.