I am a little disappointed in this third novel

What started as a clear and precise story with excellent motives and good storyline has become a confusing mess of interconnected random stories. I am quickly losing interest in this whole story. At this point I’m not even sure if I’m going to pick up the fourth book. It is sad to see such an excellent concept and storyline fragment into this jumbled mess. I would highly recommend the first two novels in this series without hesitation but this third novel gives me pause and I am not sure an almost hate to see what the next novel will bring.

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its alright.

the Dao of Magic is a fun series so far. this was one of the weaker books in the series so far. But I get the impression that the author is building up for something in the future. Worth a listen

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Yes, it keeps getting better

Enough said, it gets better. Well done Andries Louws, witty, fun, yes... Keep it up!

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Downhill Quick

This series went downhill fast. I couldn't even finish this book. The story jumps from one story line to another and you find yourself wondering if you missed something, because it is so hard to follow. And a series that had a clear path has jumped the wagon and has gone rouge. I have no idea where this storyline is going now, and find myself not wanted to find out either.

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Awesome better and better

like I said the series just keeps getting better and better can't wait for the Nextbook this series is one of my favorites

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better than the last two

Don't give up on this series. It's really good. Just because the last book wasn't as good don't judge this one.

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Still intrigued

The characters and world building are still good enough to keep me intrigued. The humor also stays at a good level.

Now the Tao of Cultivation - Apparently

The Tao of Magic... in the middle of this book I suddenly felt a sense of deja vu - like I was listening to The Ten Realms and the growth of Alva. This isn't an accusation of plagiarism, I'm just telling you that in this book there's a lot more about about management, immigration to the Tree, interacting with the King as a client, and so on. Future books are different, but this one is certainly setting up characters and details that will be used then.

The Kindle version of the book advertises this as a 'Western Cultivation Series'. And a turn towards cultivation certainly happened. So there's no real complaint.

Despite the world building, this book has plenty pf what I see are core story line threads: those of Drew and the unintended consequences of his actions, the investigation of 'what is going on with this messed up world?', and again those questions of 'how to interact with people in a way that is positive to them'. And we do see character development.

I'm happy that I got book 3&4 at the same time

I hate having to wait when a great book ends on a cliffhanger. Inventive, humorous, and thought provoking, this book has it all and Pavi Proczko has excellent narration!

What happened

After the first 2 books, I rushed to pick this up as soon as it was available. Sadly this was a jumbled mess and disappointing. Way too many storylines and chapters dedicated to side stories/characters. Took several weeks to finish this with at least 4 other books finished in between. Hope this series finds it's way again. This whole book felt like a side quest book and not a very good one.