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Viridian Gate Online: Crimson Alliance

An litRPG Adventure - The Viridian Gate Archives, Book 2
Lu par : Armen Taylor
Série : The Viridian Gate Archives, Volume 2
Durée : 10 h et 29 min

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October, 2042.

Three days ago, Jack Mitchel saved his life. By dying.

He dodged a world-ending bullet - in the form of an extinction-level asteroid, cannonballing toward Earth - by successfully uploading his mind into the brand new, ultra-immersive, fantasy-based VRMMORPG - Viridian Gate Online. Unfortunately, he's also stumbled headlong into a secret conspiracy that will transform V.G.O. into a new feudal dark age.

Jack expected to live out his new fantasy life in peace, but now he and his misfit crew of rebels are the only ones preventing a tyrant emperor and his regime from taking power. Thankfully, everything isn't quite as hopeless as it seems - Jack has a plan. Sort of. With only a handful of supporters, he's going to get the jump on the bloodthirsty empire, by snatching one of their key cities right from underneath their noses. In order to pull off the impossible, however, Jack's going to have to develop his formidable Shadowmancer powers, raid some ridiculous dungeons, and make some shady allies - allies who may be more dangerous than the empire itself.

©2017 James A. Hunter and Shadow Alley Press, Inc. (P)2017 James A. Hunter and Shadow Alley Press, Inc.

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  • Josh Noneya
  • 08/02/2019

Huge plot holes and lazy story development

Great narration – poor story.

The premise is good, but the writing is way to formulaic. Plot holes – ugh, plot holes and lazy writing for days!

So the main character is supposed to be an experienced gamer, but is constantly making mistakes that would make even a casual gamer cringe.

He is presented as this genius smart guy, and all of his friends and associates are impressed with his ideas, strategy, and wit. He makes ridiculous far fetched plans and decisions that always work out, but when faced with simple problems with glaring answers are presented to him, he ALWAYS (as in every single time) makes the obviously bad choice and has to be bailed out by his friends or “barely scrape through.”

Let's talk about his outlook/attitude: he flips between arrogantly cocky, a beacon of virtue, even keeled, constantly second guessing himself, and full of self doubt. Instead of choosing a character mentality (smart guy, cocksure asshole, Mr. Virtue, emo kid, etc.) the author tried to do it all, and it leaves you with a bi-polar, sometimes schizophrenic who is frequently high on coffee and sugar. Be ready for some whiplash.

Is there a serious/semi-serious fight happening? Things start off well – take a turn for the worst – and right at that point where things are going to go terribly wrong or maybe somehow work out – this is when the main character decides to ponder the meaning of life – or the price of beans – or what his favorite color is or should be (you know – to build suspense) – then he makes the right choice and hooray it somehow works out. EVERY. SINGLE. TIME.

It is very frustrating because the premise is great, and the overarching story isn't bad either. It is the details that ruin this series.

Does it get better later on in the series?

No.

It doesn't.

The author uses the same old formulas and patterns over and over. Which is a shame because with just a little bit of rewriting this could be one of the best series in the genera. It really had that much potential, but I'm 5 books in and it is just the same pattern repeating endlessly.

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  • Ray Johnson
  • 22/03/2018

No Sophomore Slump Here

Book two of VGO really continues to build upon the first, and brings about the beginning of a plot line that was set up early in the book one. As things go, this book really steps up its game and the action and intrigue really get supercharged. The plot advances at a pleasurable pace, and at no time do you feel like there were unnecessary parts of the tale. Everything fits together like perfect little puzzle pieces, and no part is just thrown in.

We get a nice epic battle, and a great confrontation with the big bad we want to see get an uppercut to the jaw with a war hammer. There are alliances struck, and sacrifices made, and this plays out like a great classic fantasy. We even get a nice little "Matrix" styled moment at the end.

Grimjack is someone you can really appreciate, and Cutter is worth listening to every second he appears. I have to laugh, as Taylor really makes the thief sound like Mick Jagger (at least in my mind). Abby finally gets some attention, and Grimjack manages to concoct a plan that might just help him get some breathing space.

The characterizations are pitch perfect, from the stoic Russian to the battle ready Texan. The story keeps amping up, and the plots pacing picks up with every turn of the page. In no way does the book suffer a sophomoric slump like most sequels do. It somehow manages to take what came before it, and improve upon it. As I said, Taylor does some great voicework, and he gives life to numerous characters. Even though I did receive a promo code for this review it in no way influenced my considerations of the material, and in fact, inspired me to be more honest. In fact, getting a code generally makes me harsher as a reviewer as I am more often concerned what someone like Me will decide based on my review.

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  • Kindle Customer
  • 10/11/2017

Great listen

Book 2 was action packed and exciting. A fun listen and narrated very well. I would definitely recommend this story.

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  • Jessica Shook
  • 04/10/2017

Another home run for Hunter

There were two moments of sheer brilliance in the book that made me hoot aloud, several that made me laugh hysterically, and many that made me bite my nails. This litRPG adventure had my blood pumping, my gut turning, and got me writing a review as passionate as the writing.

Well executed, fair amounts of humor, plenty of adult chuckle moments, and enough blood shed, loot collecting, and boss slaying action to slick any gamer's literary lust.

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  • Kindle Customer
  • 18/09/2017

the Further Adventures in Veridian online

our main character is trying to set himself up so he'll safely be able to live in this new universe

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  • Amazon Customer
  • 06/09/2017

awsome

loved the struggle and the strategy a little predictable at times but you where kinda of hoping it would go that way anyways so I was ok with it

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  • Mathias
  • 23/08/2017

High potential, not quite realised

Like the first book it had a high potential, interesting characters in a world i would like to know more about.

Narator was good, good voices and accents, but a little bit top many mistakes stressing the wrong words.

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  • Christopher
  • 04/07/2019

Vanilla pound cake

As in this is an enjoyable audiobook to listen to (in spite of the annoyingly, over-dramatic narration), but its nowhere near a 5 star LitRPG series. Sorta like if the only thing for dessert is vanilla pound cake, you’re gonna eat it and it might even be pretty good, but given multiple options, you’re probably going to go for something else.

That said, it held my attention fairly well, and the only thing that was actually bad about this audiobook was the often hammy narration... It wasn’t Vikas Adam bad, and I was mostly able to ignore it, but it did regularly pull me out of the story.

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  • Irshad Karim
  • 26/06/2018

Good, but could be better

I'll be brief. This book, like the first, has a lot of potential but suffers both in writing and in narration in a way that makes it feel forced. The prose is overly dramatic, pressed too tightly with similes and metaphors. The narration makes you feel as though every other word is deep and suggestive, demanding your complete attention and investment.

It simply lacks balance. In order for the analogies to carry weight, there needs to be a good deal of simplicity to surround them. Same goes for dramatic emphasis in the narration. Not everything should be the most important thing.

As for the story, it's pretty good. The climax fell a little flat, but it was still enjoyable overall. The sequel is out, and I am interested in it, but I'm going to need a break from listening it. I don't think this series is one I could binge - with all of the forced dramaticism, my eyes would pop out of my skull from being rolled too much.

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  • Jzang
  • 14/02/2018

Love the premise

I love the premise of this book, but I do have an issue. This book feels rushed. I feel like the series could easily be spread out in to 7-8 books

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