Awful. Published rough draft without finishing it.

This is awful. The idea behind the story is good, even the plot, but it was all wasted by the author not finishing the writing! It’s a very sparse rough draft. No character development. No relationship development. It just tells what happens with no artistry to the language, and the bare bones of a story. It needed to be flushed out with many more details added, as well as character and relationship development created. There is no logical reason for them to suddenly be in love after only three days of knowing each other, having sex once, and suddenly all is hearts and roses. The timeline needed to be stretched out so they have time to actually interact, get to know each other, develop as individuals and for their relationship to develop and for love to actually grow. Spoiler, but not surprising, she’s pregnant on the third day - just to add it in like a box to be checked. Maybe if the last part was set even a month in their future it might not have felt so bizarre, even if it’s a half-alien pregnancy. Her lax attitude towards the other alien men’s comments about abducting and claiming their mates is a little offensive, too. She really ought to have stood up to them a bit more, telling them to treat the women with respect. She said it once, they ignore her and keep talking like Neanderthals about women, and she ignores it. WTH? The performance was fine. Nothing spectacular but not too bad. The dialogue is a bit stunted, but that’s more a problem of how it is written, not how it is performed.

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Good short story

Okay read, but by no means epic. I would suggest this story to those looking for a pallet cleaner between series.

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Ok

It was a typical super hero story with the assist of a damsel in distress. Glacier is a pretty cool character (no pun intended). Narrators were ok, Glacier’s voice sounded like Davy Jones of the Monkeys fame.

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i hate that I even tried

I was really intrigued since it has a lot of the qualities I like in a book, post apocalyptic, aliens, romance.. but the plot just wasn't there and the narrators were hard to listen to. I really want to like this book, but if you are looking for something with a simple plot and don't mind the accents, then by all means try this.

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Could not finish

It had potential but there was no character development. The narrators made the experience worse. The female narrator sounds like a child, which made the whole thing creepy. This is an extremely short story with no substance.

feels like it misses a lot

feels like it's jumping around. there just isn't enough detail, it is actually confusing with the lack of detail.

Love it

Absolutely great audiobook. The narrators were great. Story was not boring. Loved the characters. A must listening!

Great Story weak male narrative

The story is great! I am buying every single book in this series that is available on Audible.
The male narrator has a nice accent but.... he sounds like he is only 18 yrs old! That's the only thing/ voice that ruined this story, but the story was strong enough and great enough to stand on its own and warrant me to purchase all books related to the series.
Audible, if you read which you probably won't, do something about some the narrator's within your Audible book's, they ruin your value of membership cost. Find more narrators such as Kai Kennicott and Wren Ross, pleeeeez oh pleeeez!!!🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼

Sweet but short

The story didn’t really have enough details for me. Some of the lead up and anticipation that I like to feel in a story was lacking. There wasn’t enough conflict for me either. With that being said the story itself between two main characters was really sweet and what gave this book something for me to still listen to. It didn’t have me hanging on the edge of my seat but it was enough for me to Listen to while doing other things.

Male reader is awful

concept is good but the male reader is truly awful. he is dry and emotions don't match tone. his voice grates and doesn't inspire you to like the character in any way.. female reader is great. don't waste your time.