Good short story

Okay read, but by means epic. I would suggest this story to those looking for a pallet cleaner between series.

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Ok

It was a typical super hero story with the assist of a damsel in distress. Glacier is a pretty cool character (no pun intended). Narrators were ok, Glacier’s voice sounded like Davy Jones of the Monkeys fame.

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i hate that I even tried

I was really intrigued since it has a lot of the qualities I like in a book, post apocalyptic, aliens, romance.. but the plot just wasn't there and the narrators were hard to listen to. I really want to like this book, but if you are looking for something with a simple plot and don't mind the accents, then by all means try this.

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Awful. Published rough draft without finishing it.

This is awful. The idea behind the story is good, even the plot, but it was all wasted by the author not finishing the writing! It’s a very sparse rough draft. No character development. No relationship development. It just tells what happens with no artistry to the language, and the bare bones of a story. It needed to be flushed out with many more details added, as well as character and relationship development created. There is no logical reason for them to suddenly be in love after only three days of knowing each other, having sex once, and suddenly all is hearts and roses. The timeline needed to be stretched out so they have time to actually interact, get to know each other, develop as individuals and for their relationship to develop and for love to actually grow. Spoiler, but not surprising, she’s pregnant on the third day - just to add it in like a box to be checked. Maybe if the last part was set even a month in their future it might not have felt so bizarre, even if it’s a half-alien pregnancy. Her lax attitude towards the other alien men’s comments about abducting and claiming their mates is a little offensive, too. She really ought to have stood up to them a bit more, telling them to treat the women with respect. She said it once, they ignore her and keep talking like Neanderthals about women, and she ignores it. WTH? The performance was fine. Nothing spectacular but not too bad. The dialogue is a bit stunted, but that’s more a problem of how it is written, not how it is performed.

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Great Story

I really enjoyed this book and the two person narration was wonderful. It really brought the characters to life. I thought the way the lead male was unemotional and single minded to begin with and then became more empathic and loving really added depth to the character and the book. I look forward to more of this series.

So hot

Loved the ebook, the audiobook is even better. Love the male narrators voice, so sexy.

i tried to keep listening but i couldnt

the story was to simple and not new to me. I had better once so am sorry i couldnt countine

Love from Beyond

I love the story. It will be one of my favorite series. I like Miranda Bridges.

story too short

it need more of a build up ! I love the story but it missing something more details more plot. I am sure this story can be .. revived.

Sigh

I’m all for strong heroine but Hazel is beyond annoying, the author should have put a foot stomp in the story while she had tantrum of the dumbest shit.